All Comments on 'Beyond Lost Innocence'

kind of a nothingburger, really. not up to your usual standards.

Didn't you learn proper punctuation in elementary school? There's a major difference between using the apostrophe and quotation marks. Spoken dialog is ALWAYS placed inside of quotation marks. Using apostrophes as you have done is sometimes used to accentuate thoughts since we normally think in sentences as if talking to ourselves, but it has never been the accepted convention to denote spoken dialog with them. 1/5