All Comments on 'Beyond Summer of '79 Pt. 03'

Ruined for me by strap-on scene

These two are amazing together sure there were parts I don't like but its easy enough to scroll past them and get back to the cousins lovin. Fantastic story and hope you have some more, maybe even some babies.

I’m just going to pretend the orgy & strap-on scenes didn’t happen. Without those, it was a great story.

Did I miss the marriage in Germany? If you do more, and I hope you do, I'd love for that to be included.

As for the orgy and strap-on scenes, these were tests of the relationship. I sped through them looking for the good part. And I wasn't disappointed. The good part was their reaction, the way both strengthened the bond between them.

I particularly like the build up to the DS part. You kept us in suspense until the very last moment. Again, that's excellent writing.

THANKS

it had the potential to be a great story. except for the inclusion of others. ruined a great story.

Love both of these series. Hope we get more of there future life.

Loved the whole story. And love the way you tell (write) it. It flows so naturally I’m going to read it again from the top. More chapters PLEASE.

ALL THE 7 - FIRST 4 + NEXT 3 - WERE REALLY GOOD.

THOUGH THE 4TH CHAPTER ENDING IS THE REAL ENDING, WHEN HE IS 62 AND SHE IS 70.

OVER ALL A GOOD SERIES.

EXCEPTING THE FOURSOME.

MY VIEWS. NO OFFENCES.