by misterwho
This one had a twist in the end. Makes you wait for the next chapters!
It is wonderful to see you here again. As I do not find most writers as interesting I rarely check and today I did and and was quite agreeably surprised.
But I was a trifle disconcerted when I read the following.
"small flitting kisses" and "suck sable ones"
Et tu?
I appreciate the care with which you read Old One! the second one is indeed an avoidable typo.
But 'small flitting kisses"? I think that is fine! No?