All Comments on 'Bhabhi Ji Pt. 01'

by misterwho

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sandbankssandbanksover 5 years ago
Thanks for the new one

This one had a twist in the end. Makes you wait for the next chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Most welcome return sez the old one

It is wonderful to see you here again. As I do not find most writers as interesting I rarely check and today I did and and was quite agreeably surprised.

But I was a trifle disconcerted when I read the following.

"small flitting kisses" and "suck sable ones"

Et tu?

misterwhomisterwhoover 5 years agoAuthor
That's the second Et Tu from you!

I appreciate the care with which you read Old One! the second one is indeed an avoidable typo.

But 'small flitting kisses"? I think that is fine! No?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Big Fan

Post more, brother!!

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