All Comments on 'Bianca & I'

I really liked this story. Alot. I only have one complaint. Why did you have to tell us that their relationship didnt last without telling us how long they were together, or how it happened, or even what happened to them afterward?

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

I can understand your complaint and to answer your question, I attribute that to two reasons: First, I wasn't in a very good mood when I finished the story. Second, I was originally going to do a sequel in which they broke up. Obviously, I never got around to writing that story and if I had the chance to do it again, I would probably omit that final paragraph. Hope it didn't spoil your enjoyment too much.

Good story, kinda derailed at the end. The fact he has to convince her to date him kind of sets up they don't work it out. Yet, a happier ending would have been nice. A sequel about their break up would have been depressing as he'll, so I guess a thank you for not doing that should be offered!

Good characterization but clunky with lots of big grammatical mistakes that were very distracting.

I hate these stories that kill it in the end. Realism be damned. Romance. Not Fling. I liked it, but It kills it when you make it end like that.

I’m not sure this story really qualifies as a “Romance”. He told her he loved her and she said she loved him too, but only “as a friend”. If that statement doesn’t shoot a romance down in flames I don’t know what would. Trust me, I know. Been there, got that tee shirt.

so she says she doesn’t love him. he goes “why not” and then she goes “oh okay nevermind i love you.” wtf????

Why did she give in if she didn’t feel anything romantic towards him? Weird.