- Romance
- Bianhua Ch. 02
- Page 4
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Click here"What pleases me about him," Bonnie said. "The way he treats our daughter has not changed since day one. They seem to be able to communicate with each other without saying a word. Have you noticed that when their together there never far from each other."
"What is that telling you," Ian asked.
"Those two are not just building a relationship," Bonnie said. "They are laying the foundation of their walk in life when they become man and wife. Those two old souls are going to be an unstoppable force when they become one."
Part three to follow.
- COMMENTS
Purplefizzover 1 year agoI get the feeling that English isn’t @TheMarlboroMan first language, I find a fair few minor mistakes with phrasing or word selection that makes me think that, I’m not complaining mind, I have no chance of writing in another language, which makes what’s been written significantly better.
P.S. re Scotch Whisky, you can make either a single malt or a blend, there is no such thing as a double malt, if it’s made in Scotland or elsewhere in the U.K., it has to be aged for a minimum of 3yrs in a wooden barrel to legally be Scotch, anything less and it’s legally just a flavoured vodka.
Rancher46about 2 years agoThis story to me is fast becoming one of the best stories I have read here on Lit. The storyline is excellent and the characters I must say are taking on a life of their own. The slow buildup of the love affair between Alana and Dirk is just so perfect. I must say there also seems to be an improvement in grammar and punctuation making the reading so much more pleasurable. Well done 5++Stars.
servant111over 2 years agoSecond time through for me....and like fine wine....it only gets better. This is one to reread and savor.
olderdaveover 3 years agoThis is your best yet. Better editing. But why not capture the gas to run the generator?
tentaclesforallover 3 years agoThis is fast becoming a really intriguing little story. Don't make us wait to long for the next chapter. I'm really enjoying this one.
