All Comments on 'Big Bad Karma Ch. 01 Sc. 01'

Aaahh I love it!

This is the best story I have ever read and I have read almost all in this topic.

more pages next time please.

Well written and a fun story. I hope there is more to come.

you are off to a nice start with this story. I wonder what she will think of Murphy and his law when she wakes up to discover she's not in heaven but right here on earth w/ this "Adonis". I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

Hi all! I'm so glad you guys are liking the start of Big Bad Karma, and yes, there is definitly more to come. Anyone know a good editor/muse/writer's block repeller? I'm currently in the process of tweaking the first and second scenes of chapter two and need some helpful critisism!

Be on the lookout for Ch. 1 Sc. 2. I've already submitted it and should be up sometime this week.

It's only one page! LOL Other than that, awesome beginning. I will definitely keep an eye out for the next posts

love the humour, especially the monty python ref.

please continue. ;0)

Soooooo. . . Really loved it, not sure what you're doing . . . Is this the chapter that you re-did? Combined the three following chapters into this one but, it's been around two years since you posted. Too bad. The plot interested me. Characters are fun. Pacing is good. Again, too bad that you have apparently given up on it. Would <i>love<i> to read more.

I just found one of the BEST stories in this website, only to be left hanging :( ....

.......PLEASE PLEASE COME BACK AND FINISH!!!!!!!!!!!

You have a great sense of humour. By far one of the best authors I've come across so far in this genre. Great entertainment with great writing!

Please continue from THIS part of the story. It sounded good until no more material :(