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- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoPlease continue from THIS part of the story. It sounded good until no more material :(
Anonymousabout 5 years agoYou have a great sense of humour. By far one of the best authors I've come across so far in this genre. Great entertainment with great writing!
SillySquirrelalmost 10 years agoI just found one of the BEST stories in this website, only to be left hanging :( ....
.......PLEASE PLEASE COME BACK AND FINISH!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoSoooooo. . . Really loved it, not sure what you're doing . . . Is this the chapter that you re-did? Combined the three following chapters into this one but, it's been around two years since you posted. Too bad. The plot interested me. Characters are fun. Pacing is good. Again, too bad that you have apparently given up on it. Would <i>love<i> to read more.
frosty_hore8about 13 years agolove the humour, especially the monty python ref.
please continue. ;0)
Wolf_girl13about 13 years agoIt's only one page! LOL Other than that, awesome beginning. I will definitely keep an eye out for the next posts
darkgoddessnightabout 13 years agoAuthorHi all! I'm so glad you guys are liking the start of Big Bad Karma, and yes, there is definitly more to come. Anyone know a good editor/muse/writer's block repeller? I'm currently in the process of tweaking the first and second scenes of chapter two and need some helpful critisism!
Be on the lookout for Ch. 1 Sc. 2. I've already submitted it and should be up sometime this week.
MizTabout 13 years agoyou are off to a nice start with this story. I wonder what she will think of Murphy and his law when she wakes up to discover she's not in heaven but right here on earth w/ this "Adonis". I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
