by cadeauxxx
This is one of the best to recent memory. I love how Kim is the boss controlling her family and lays down the smack on Steven. The threesome with Salma was fun, but the real treat of this story was the hell Steven goes through. You did a great job creating tension and chaos with his whole situation. Also thought it was funny how he becomes friends with the same guy who pointed at a gun at him. Great story telling and character work.
Wow, that threesome part with Salma and Kim was phenomenal. The stories with Vida are fun but I'm hoping Steven is leaving her for good after this. He deserves a break for once and to be truly happy.
Steven is going through pure hell. J-Lo better make things easier for the poor guy, he needs some happiness for once without getting fucked over.