All Comments on 'Big Brother does the Laundry'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Wrong place for this work

I'm surprised this got through screening as it isn't meant to be erotic in any sense. I saw the description 'no sex' and thought it might have still been something like big Brother doing little sisters washing.

I don't get this, is the author trying to get an audience to pay attention for a half baked business idea, or is this a teaser for a story of a dystopian future?

PS laundry mats are mostly used by people who don't have room for their own machine, especially when it comes to dryers. If it's a matter of not wanting to buy one outright... Ever heard of radio rentals?

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 5 years ago
Is it a story

Or just an idea for a story. With no characters, no plot, no nothing. Reads like a diary entry to fill in time when travelling for work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Bad Acid Trip?

I mean, honestly, wtaf???

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
1984

LOVE slap hapy papy #9

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