All Comments on 'Big Butt Chronicles: Holiday'

by mondotoken

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eleventhsoneleventhsonover 7 years ago
Helluva story!

Although it may have been nice if you had taken it just a tad further to show the relation build from more than just sex, it was a raw but honest expression of feelings from a reluctant man who wanted to love and be loved, in spite of all of his societal conditioning. Men have feelings, too, and it was nice that they were honored, but also not artificially dressed up in faux romance.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Your best work yet

This was raw this was real. I've appreciated your work for years but this is the most impressive story I've read to date from you Happy Holidays Mondotoken

Sincerely- Almond Butter

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I knew the jessie character was based off of love randalin. I kinda still wanted a continuation of Latisha. That kinda ended abruptly.

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