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Click hereTracy turned her head and looked at me and gave me the nod. I started pushing and got my head in. Tracy let out a whimper and a sexy moan. I applied more lube and proceeded to get almost half my cock in her ass.
Tracy was constantly moaning and wasn't paying much attention to Debbie's pussy.
Debbie came out to watch and was still keeping Tracy's ass spread.
It was an amazing view as I spread her wide. I then started to work my way in and out with increased moans coming from Tracy as Debbie kept putting lube in Tracy's crack.
Debbie egged me on and said that Tracy was now ready to be fucked hard.
I increased the tempo and could then feel Tracy orgasm. This sent me over the top and I dropped a full load of cum in her ass. I then slowly pulled out and fed my gooey member to Debbie who gladly licked me clean.
Debbie moved me aside and proceeded to clean Tracy's gaping asshole. As she licked it, Tracy was able push out some of my cum for Debbie to eat. Dessert indeed.
I was now spent, but realized that we still needed to do some work on Debbie. I pushed Debbie onto her back.
I then got Tracy to sit on her face and lean over her pussy. I instructed her to start inserting a finger into Debbie's pussy while I took the butt plug and started inserting it into her ass.
Debbie was getting quite animated and wanted more, so I then had Tracy add fingers until she had three fingers in Debbie's pussy. What an incredible sight of Debbie's pussy lips wrapped around Tracy's fingers as she pumped them in out of Debbie.
Debbie went off and orgasmed for what seemed like five minutes. I then had Tracy pull her hand out and I licked it clean and then leaned in to clean up Debbie's pussy.
The next day started calmly. Debbie was asking about the company I worked for. She thought that I could do better and was going to see if her contacts knew of any better positions.
Tracy mentioned that her younger sister who was 18 and had just graduated from high school was going to visit next weekend. I wondered what was possible and saw Debbie give me a wink suggesting that she would work to enable anything.
The end... for now.
This is the first of series of stories that focus on Doug as he stats his post college relationships and career.
Future stories that I thought of after writing this include:
Let me know what you want in the comments. I read them all and have used suggestions from readers to direct my writing. I appreciate constructive criticism and suggestions. Please rate and favorite the story if you liked it. Thanks.
As I have done in my previous stories, here is an approximate porn star that would resemble each of the characters. I do this at the end of my stories, so I don't corrupt your imagination while reading.
Linda: Keisha Grey
Cathy: Gina Gerson
Nancy: Leah Gotti
Tracy: Faye Reagan
Debbie: Ash Hollywood
Thanks again to kenjisato for editing.
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Outstanding and imaginative first installment… I look forward to reading more. Love the polygamous angle 😉
Sounds like some very good future readings for this Series.. another Chapter should be the induction of his 2 roommates, Cathy and Nancy. He lets his buddy join in when he visits from Ireland.
Fantastic story! My wife had a big cock partner before we got married and I know she still fantasizes about his big cock. Especially when we watch porn and the men have unusually large cocks. She seems transfixed by their huge cocks.
I have submitted the next chapter for publication. Just waiting for it to go live. Thanks again for all the feedback.
Though not necessarily one of the options you've listed, I hope you continue to flush out the characters in the story and have them develop normal relationships.
It's what I like to do, so it may not be up your alley.
When it comes to your own budding ideas, I'd like to say that the "incest/taboo" category is already pretty crowded as is.
Perhaps you have your own special take on that however, without falling for all the tropes.
That's just my feedback however, and I'm certainly no great author.
Make sure you enjoy what you are writing, otherwise there's little point to doing this.
Wow! Another great one. How about some girl on girl double dildo action in there (no pun intended!) next time?
Well written, good editing and perfect pacing I thought. With the suggested future chapters, how about #1, followed by #2, while keeping the roomies out for now (other than keeping them nosy as before). Then have him move in to the new city while Tracy’s sister moves in with his roomies, and after a while she slowly spills the beans and they get involved as well? Regardless, I like your style and am looking forward to much, much more coming from you.
What’s in the mystery box that was not to be opened?
Thanks for all the encouragement and feedback. I really appriate it.
Swirlybird, those are a lot of suggestions. I won't be bringing a cockold into the story as I know nothing of this culture and am not into it. I want to be honest as you put some real thought in your suggestions. Seems like you might want to write a story of your own :)
I will consider expanding the character of Andrew and the dynamic with Nancy.
Know that I read all my comments and take the seriously.
Cheers, Toro