by xnpd
Very good story. I still wanna find out who the buff guy from the quarry was. Personally I think it's brother #1
HOT and INTENSE!!! Wow, you're turning this hot sexy story into a hot sexy thriller. Had me on the edge of my seat reading this chapter. Thanks for ending part 6 on a calming note though. For some reason, I always think of Paulie as being safe when he's with Mario. So much going on now! Can't wait to see what happens next. MLF
Paulie’s turmoil is so well conveyed that I feel it with him, for him. The first night with Mario was pretty dark and kind of rape-y but that’s standard fare with Paulie’s encounters. Maybe tonight, with Mario, the tide will turn.
I know Paulie has to hit rock bottom in order to learn his lesson about self worth and end up with the nicer of the neighbour’s sons, but I really don’t want him to shag the alcoholic greasy piss guy.
It’s hard for me to rate todays story, although I read every word. I’m not comfortable with all the never ending rough, violent sex. Different strokes for different folks I guess. I’m still waiting for some happiness or love to manifest itself.
Superb writing, the emotional journey is raw, palpable and pushes the boundaries of our own.
It was emotional reading P's struggles. Bit surprised to see him go back to Mario after all that though, but I'm sure you have something awesome planned