All Comments on 'Big-dick Bottom Pt. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very good story. I still wanna find out who the buff guy from the quarry was. Personally I think it's brother #1

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

HOT and INTENSE!!! Wow, you're turning this hot sexy story into a hot sexy thriller. Had me on the edge of my seat reading this chapter. Thanks for ending part 6 on a calming note though. For some reason, I always think of Paulie as being safe when he's with Mario. So much going on now! Can't wait to see what happens next. MLF

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I knew they would be a good couple. Nice ending.

dnsontndnsontnabout 2 years ago

Paulie’s turmoil is so well conveyed that I feel it with him, for him. The first night with Mario was pretty dark and kind of rape-y but that’s standard fare with Paulie’s encounters. Maybe tonight, with Mario, the tide will turn.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Finally a story when we can 100% focus on P cock well done love it !

bienclarbienclarabout 2 years ago

I know Paulie has to hit rock bottom in order to learn his lesson about self worth and end up with the nicer of the neighbour’s sons, but I really don’t want him to shag the alcoholic greasy piss guy.

Dpj49Dpj49about 2 years ago

It’s hard for me to rate todays story, although I read every word. I’m not comfortable with all the never ending rough, violent sex. Different strokes for different folks I guess. I’m still waiting for some happiness or love to manifest itself.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Superb writing, the emotional journey is raw, palpable and pushes the boundaries of our own.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

New guy? Jack Daniels?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It was emotional reading P's struggles. Bit surprised to see him go back to Mario after all that though, but I'm sure you have something awesome planned

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