by xnpd
OH FUCK, FUCK, FUCK!!! I'm soaking wet with sweat after reading this. I had the awful feeling that Paulie was going to die this time. Oh yeah, you've got to make the ginger and his father pay for this time. And not just a smack alongside the head with a two by four. Grand theft, rape, kidnapping and torture, come on man, enough is enough. Even P can't be so twisted that he's OK with this fucking abuse. This has gotten so intense; I can't wait for part 8 to see what happens next. RETRIBUTION, PLEASE! Thanks for another great chapter. MLF
Despite the warning at the beginning, this chapter was far more brutal than non-consent. The shed scene was repulsive. The dad and ginger should both be in prison where they can be gangraped regularly. Wonder what will happen with the older son now. Maybe he was the mystery man from the woods, as has been theorized. And what’s up with Mario? His near obsession with Paulie at times is the exact opposite of his callous behavior with Amanda in the store. I’d like to understand Mario’s pov to get a glimpse into why he asks the way he does.
That was…a lot. I’m speechless. Maybe it was Son #1 at the quarry, in the woods. I want to call the police for Paulie. I want to take him to the emergency room. I really want to see what happens next.
This chapter was a bit too brutal for me. The child abuse of Ginger being the biggest turn off. I was hoping for more *consentual* in the nonconsent between P and Ginger. The Dad character is to brutal. He needs to be broken down BAD! This chapter was a bit too scary to enjoy. When I reread, I will most likely skip over this one.