by fireandlace0533
Loved it.
A really great story, the sex was super and I was imagining myself as Addie. Then mum finding out and accepting was a great way to end.
More please xxx
This was truly an amazing story The only thing that I could critique is the fact that it's only three chapters. But great work only one misprint in the story when Addie comes out of the bathroom it's his sister and Lisa is there not his sister and Stacy.
What a cute story. And I loved the happy ending...
I know when you started the series, you said three parts, but Don't you think Addie needs to figure out going back to school and what about her date with Matt???
Love this story. Wouldn't mind a return to Addie and Kelly's world sometime. Only criticism is Lisa and Stacie were sometimes interchanged. Just an editing issue. Otherwise it was awesome . Thank You
Like all of the others I loved the story! You captured the perfect coming out scenario. One I have dreamed about as I am sure many who read this genre have as well. Oh to be Addie! And. like the others, I hope you consider doing another series with Addie.
I agree with most of the other comments. This is an wonderful story. But what about Mom and Addie ?? Matt and Addie ?? You are a gifted writer (editing could use some help) you can't just let this story stop here.
Great story, you wonderfully portrayed the transformation of Adam into Addison (Addie) 👩❤️💋👩 and the help she received from her sister Kelly and the acceptance from her friends and boyfriend Matt and most importantly from their mother. A beautiful description of the sex between Addie and Matt, and here Adam's self-acceptance as Addie and Matt's acceptance. Addie's great discovery of how hot and fun sex with her boyfriend is.
You should keep writing about Addie, Kelly, Mom and Matt. I wonder how Addie and Matt would have turned out, what would their first date be like? What about Kelly and her life? Greetings from Poland SissyBoy from Warsaw. 😘
Wspaniała historia, cudownie przedstawiłeś przemianę Adama w Addison (Addie) 👩❤️💋👩
i pomoc jaką otrzymała od siostry Kelly oraz akceptację od jej przyjaciółek oraz chłopaka Matta a co najważniejsze od ich mamy. Piękny opis seksu pomiędzy Addie a Mattem oraz tutaj samoakceptacja Adama jako Addie i akceptacja przez Matta. Wspaniałe odkrycie przez Addie jak gorący, i ile daje przyjemności seks z chłopakiem.
Powinieneś dalej pisać o Addie, Kelly, mamie i Mattie. Ciekawe jak potoczyły by się losy Addie i Matta, jaka byłaby ich pierwsza randka? A co Kelly i jej życiem? Pozdrawiam z Polski SissyBoy z Warszawy. 😘
Lovely conclusion to a great three-part series. Just the right amount of descriptive visuals and lots of heart. The sex was hot, wet, and believable. Made me as wet as Addie. I'll be following you, Fire and Lace.
xoxo, Di
Ohhh this series mad me lay with wet panties imagine myself being addie (mom please caught me i beg you) :)
Such a beautiful story! I hope it doesn’t end there, I want more of Addie! Maybe an all girls adventure with sister and mom…Addie getting to do all the things Adam wanted to do when they grew up…another relationship…just more! Please!
A great story i have stroked myself to numerous orgasms while reading this story. I just wished I would have had a sister to make memup to look like a girl,at least my wife and motherinlaw help me dress and i enjoy sharing them with our neighbor ladies i keep all og them shaved too. Please write more of this story thank you.
This is such a heart warming story!
It touched that dream I sprays had of having a sister like that.
Thank you so much for sharing your work!
This is one of the best stories I have read here.
About time a story was written that shows caring and so much love and acceptance.
Besides the fact I know I wish I was Addie!
A great story! I loved how her sister helped her through this transition. Please, more chapters!