All Comments on 'Big Jake'

hot as hell. cant wait for the next one sir

this was hot!!! please let there be more to this!!!

nick

A truly brilliant story. Keep it up (literally-of course).I was actually there, with my dick up the young guy's ass.

A truly brilliant story. Keep it up (literally-of course).I was actually there, with my dick up the young guy's ass.

upbuilding and great characters!

Keep it comming!

This is a really doo story, I hope you continue it at some point.

Good job. He went from fighting to submitting. Had that happen when I was in my teens at truck stop. Got into the truck cab fighting by sun up I was tamed. It happens.

from the reader who wrote real life progression. Plenty of young guys feel the need to submit to a male who's older or fitter or stronger. They really enjoy getting the Alpha male's fat cock filling their mouth and stuffing their tight little twat. But I think the greatest enjoyment comes when the superior male is an older brother, an uncle, a cousin, or best of all dad himself, with all his authority and power as the kid's father. The boy aches to have dad treat him like a girl, blow his heavy loaded daddy-balls down his throat and up his ass, hear dad say, "son, you're tighter than your mother. From now on this cute little cunt of yours is mine." Sometimes hearing that is enough for the boy to shoot his own load all over his stomach and chest.

OMG! MORE LIKE THIS PLEASE!

I loved this one! I really liked how you took your time during the hot moments instead of rushing. Smack, slam.. mmm so hot!

Great stand alone, but I'd like to see you take it further.