All Comments on 'Big Johnson Trucking Ch. 02'

It would be poetic justice if everything was revealed to Lance, giving him a taste of his own medicine. Although I do sympathize that Rebecca cheated on him as well and never told him any of it, including that his daughter isn't his biological. That's just unfair

why didn't Rebecca go after him though? I mean apart from just that night, if she really loved him that seems like a pretty low effort to makeup for her mistake if she didn't search beyond going down the stairs. And if she cared about Lance why cheat and lie to him for their entire marriage?

That whole section concerning her back-story is clunky as hell. "How long?" How long WHAT? "Since I was eight"-WHAT? The fact that she had cancer, or that he isn't your father, have NOTHING to do with answering the important shit! Why is Jaz submissive and how did she become so?? WHAT did her mother DO TO HER since age eight?? All the hyper-emotional sequences serve no purpose other to BE emotional with no substance. Good writing, but somewhat lacking in structured storytelling. Q

“That whole section concerning her back-story is clunky as hell. "How long?" How long WHAT? "Since I was eight"-WHAT? The fact that she had cancer, or that he isn't your father, have NOTHING to do with answering the important shit! Why is Jaz submissive and how did she become so?? WHAT did her mother DO TO HER since age eight?? All the hyper-emotional sequences serve no purpose other to BE emotional with no substance. Good writing, but somewhat lacking in structured storytelling. Q”

Yeah, sorry for that. A lot of her backstory had to be edited out because Literotica kept flagging it for “underage sex or questioning circumstances” even though there wasn’t any sex involved. It literally just explained how she became a sub and whatnot.