All Comments on 'Big Rig Amber'

Really enjoyed this! The anonymity, the sudden sex really got me wet!

Probably one of the best that I have had the pleasure of reading lately. The intrigue and shear coincidence (yeah, right) of him having three women having his babies. What is he going to do about the her other two sisters not what he as fessed up to the one? Also, what is going to happen to the other sisters, when the bad guys find out about them? It is going to be a good couple more chapters at least. Need a few more pictures though as only two were really not enough.

It's nice to have you back writing

Always happy to read a new Jack Grierson story. Thank you for writing it and submitting it. Jack Grierson is one of my favorite characters ever.

I particularly like that for once Jack is seen from the POV of someone else. As the protagonist, he usually sees but is not seen, so I don't always know how to picture him in my head.

please continue

Are these pictures in story your own. You have a beautiful toned body

Hotstudmanu

Your writing is captivating. Your pictures added to the story & I’m cocksure that I’m not alone in hoping you will find time to write more.

wildwillum at gmail

I've read four or five of your stories now and enjoyed them all. I like that they have some plots, even if the main point is the sex. They are on Literotica, after all. Some of your vocabulary puzzles me, however. You use the word gout when describing sex. From the context, I guess it means a drop. It's goût, with a circumflex, in French, so I figure maybe you're Canadian and using gout to mean drop comes from the French? In American, though, gout is a malady due to a high concentration of uric acid, usually in a toe or extremity. 5* for this story. I like the black ops connection, although in the Ryder Fox stories that part of Jack Grierson is missing. Maybe that issue is resolved in some other stories of yours which I have yet to read. 5* for this story, ~~JB

PS: Love the pictures!