by SmileyTheSlug
It's always a debate as to whether a story in Literotica is primarily an exercise in sex narrative or an attempt to write reasonable fiction with a dash or two of erotic content. This was a well done sex escapade with a small dash of storyline. i prefer the story with sex on the side, but this was pretty well done for the other approach. 4*
Beatiful. Long time lurker here and this story is ABSOLUTELY on of the best I think I've ever read. I remember reading the first part and thinking it might simply end up being a one off, and I'm not gonna lie I was a little disappointed when I thought I might not see more of this.
The writing is organic, interesting and very arousing and I'm so glad to see you continuing this tale of two lovers brought together by circumstance; absolutely cannot wait to see where you end up going with this, and
please do continue. This is all around amazing!
I love the characters discovery of each other. It's a nice story without falling into violence or shameful name calling. this is a fun story. can't wait to read more about them. looks like I may have missed a part 1...just have them get into her tits more please
Holy shit this is even better than the first 1! The accurate thoughts a guy would think after having an orgasm and he has to use the bathroom....😳 it also doesn't help that cowgirl creampie is a fetish of mine with an big ass....but the cherry on the top? These two getting attached to one another. And how it isn't over the top yet it is quite surreal! Hope there will be more and she use her tits on my guy! May not be real but I'm proud of him. Thanks smiley
Absolutely wonderful, for some reason this seems like a well done vanilla romantic comedy, I support the idea that you put more emphasis on the tits, and if you could write a titjob, or tell in more detail how the outfits fit her, that would be great, thanks to write.