by Samuelx
Too bad...This plot line, if developed properly, could have resulted in a great story. Instead, we get phrases like, "...twelve inch super cock..." I busted out laughing and hit the "BACK" button. Another story so completely improbable that it is rendered unreadable.
12" up the pooper shoot would cause a disturbance for sure.
Ha, what a laugh.
Started out interesting and went down hill from there and it was even submitted under a different name "Fat Woman Gets Sodomized" The only thing that changed was a few lines in the opening paragraph.
Like the others i started reading this and was ready for a really good story. It went from almost sounding like an episode of CSI to an episode of some cartoon. She took a 12 inch "super cock" basically dry in her virgin cavity and suddenly loved it? Next time submit the story as fantasy.
Dumb, just completely dumb....
12 inch supercock, indeed! Sounds like the name of one of those pink jelly glittered dildos you get as a door prize at those adult toy parties.
But yeah, anyways, the story is just pure crap. Better luck next time.