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So fucking hot, loved it a bitch mother and daughter my personal fantasy come true!

It might be incest but its boring incest.

One of the dirtiest and loveliest things I've read on here. Keep 'em cumming! :)

Although I found the story somewhat hard to follow, I did enjoy the taboo of daughter fucking her mothers boyfriend, then the mother joining them, with pure animalistic sex taking over. I liked the 3 different sides of telling the story too. Hope to see if more of this story follows or if this writer creates something else.

I have to say the creativity of your story, especially the change in viewpoints was refreshing and clever. I also enjoyed the segue into the story - the computer pictures and the mastubation scene.

If I were to offer any criticism it would be one thing: edit, as several of your sentences don't make sense. My suggestion would be to find a reader and have them highlight the sentences that are confusing. This will help your story a lot.

On a personal note, I liked your story a lot. The scene at the lake, the video, Kyung's physical descriptions were all great; however I truly don't like the incest category. Therefore, it disn't resonate with me as deeply as what it could have had. But, that's just a personal preference. Nothing to change if you like writing in that category.

All the best and keep writing.

The first change in POV surprised me and broke the rhythm of the story for me, but the second, from the Mother's point of view made it all worth while. Nice and Nasty finish. Good luck in the contest.

A sexy story that was written well.

That was incredibly hot !!! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐