All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 52'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very Good, but too short

You are a good writer. My only criticism is your stories are too short.

I would not mind you taking some time (i.e. a few days) between the release of chapters, so they are longer and move the story further along.

dozendozenabout 7 years ago
Unlike anonymous below

I really like the fact that your posts are so frequent, even if they are pretty short.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

pornstars? that was the big lame secret? so not worth it.

Red48beardRed48beardabout 7 years ago
second opinion

yes the stories are short

but for some of us with short attention spans

this is the best way to tell an adventure

keeps me coming back to see what happening

with the "family" and other friends

good job

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...