by SteveWallace
You are a good writer. My only criticism is your stories are too short.
I would not mind you taking some time (i.e. a few days) between the release of chapters, so they are longer and move the story further along.
I really like the fact that your posts are so frequent, even if they are pretty short.
yes the stories are short
but for some of us with short attention spans
this is the best way to tell an adventure
keeps me coming back to see what happening
with the "family" and other friends
good job