All Comments on 'Billionaire and the Sisters Ch. 89'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Demanding feed back.

I hate it when authors/execs do stupid things to get attention/feedback:

"Given Izzy's tinier size, I looked even larger against her body. I'd show Julie later."

Where in st johns did Izzy cum ... out of the blue carrib? That will get you a 1* every time... it is so distracting!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
approx 1/4 of the way down page one of Ch.88

We also had a few guests with us, some of our usual party crew: Andy and Margo, Greg and Kim, Sean and Pam, our little French cuties who worked with Cindy - Chloe and Zoé, Kate Kenworthy or Kat Kitt - our favorite stripper at the Club, Don - a solo male since Edie had to go off to a five-day retreat over the weekend for her work, and Steve - Sheila's old fuck buddy who looked like Fabio and had hair longer than most of the women. Our whole family was also present: Carter, Deke, Ryan, Mike, James, and me for the males; and Elsa, Cindy, Melanie, Sheila, Izzy, KC, Marcia, Stacy, and Alice on the female side

DadDavisDadDavisalmost 7 years ago
Much more

Why can't there be 16 or 20 pages in each? Darn! Now I have to wait for the next. chapter...

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