All Comments on 'Billy Bonoka's Whorehouse Factory'

Title says it all! Good work!

Very clever parody. Lots of fun.

Damn, whatever drugs you've got, you could offer to share!

This was bizzare and entertaining, thank you.

I laughed out loud several times while reading this, the ultimate praise. Well done!

"Let's get this meat train moving!" - That's where I lost it. Thanks for writing such a fun story!

and a hearty guffaw!

lol! bunch of laughs. amazing n captivating story. didnt realize by the name but i did around 1/2 down first page the wily wonka theme. great story n look forward to what you cook up next.

You need a Editor Badly! The fuckups took away from your story.

Hilarious story, lots of fun.

Funny story, I like it a lot. AAAA++++

Really cute story. Could use some editing but very funny. Maybe you could add to it if you edit it, like where are they now for all the participants.

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"Can somebody PLEASE shut up that damn coyote!"

This was an Archer reference wasn't it?

Reminds me of a certain brown colored candy factory...

Loved it, loved every story I’ve read here. 5 stars to this and all the others I’ve read. I think these are the best I’ve read in a long time if ever on this site.

Ha, that was a pretty good twist. Nice story.