All Comments on 'Billy Owns and Breeds His Mother'

Definitely do a part 3, great story!

would have loved to hear here feeding you as you sucked on her milk filled breast.i loved sucking on my wifes and a girl i met .mmmmm feeding me every night and day .keeping them both filled for me and the baby mmmmmmmm

How about both mom’s and son’s have a wild time in the same bed swapping partners????

You think too highly of yourself. This was the most boring thing I have ever trek to read. I gave up halfway through the second page. Why don't you read some of the other stories on here, and maybe learn how to write a real story.

Enjoyed it! Can’t wait for future chapters.

Great, but how many times can you use the the word fat or Cashew?

great story!!!

This is to a specific comment. The 'Billy' duo of stories have over 55k views and over 115 likes each. My stories are not Nobel awards but erotic writing. Part three comprising suggestions from commentators will be ready in about a fortnight. Perhaps my 'Jerome' series that has no 'fuck me' content and is more literary might be more enjoyable. A member for four years with no published stories should put the rock down.

Overall great story, but you need to work on your adjectives. You way overuse Mature: mature tits, mature pussy, mature ass. Over and over again. I found it really detracts.

Then you have cashew clit. Once maybe, but that's it!! Seriously.

Cashew clit sounds weird and is a turn off

If you are so easily upset by somewhat negative comments, then maybe you should post your stories, but not allow comments. As someone living with a clit "cashew clit" is just jarring, and you did overuse "mature." The reader is already into the incest/age gap theme, so they don't need a constant reminder with one word. Yes you have a lot of readers and positive responses, but the input from critics can make you a better writer. My guess is that "mature" is a stand-in word for other things representing the mother's age that's a major turn on. Mine those depths. There's probably even more erotic material there. And if you only want positive feedback then be honest with yourself, and turn off the ability to comment.

Great !!

You Did to your mom everything I wanted to do to mine.

Still dream about it today every time I jerk off.

Did not care that much about this story it has too much hardness towards his mother I like them more when a son and mother have a hard but satisfying sex not so violent there needs to be more caring for each other!!

Loved the Billy stories, thanks.

Thanks for the warning. I'll pass.

to impressed with his own penis!!!! ljb

Too long, lacking refinement and crude.

No gentleness, treating ladies like pieces of meat and as a sex slave. A true gentleman would romantically seduce his mother,with affection, respect and gentleness.

Your attitude towards a woman is repugnant and crude. Buggery is filthy and highly dangerous.

Boring

did son get mum pregnant?yes/no

Of all the incestuous stories between family members....the mother/son relationships seem to be more erotic. Top it off with both wanting to make a baby is tops.

Boring really

The premise of this story is good, but the characters need development as does the descriptive text, the author needs to address the physics of the female body there are no lips(labia) around the anus.

Need to continue maybe we’re she finds out that she pregnant with two babies by her own son and then they find out that they friends mom also pregnant so maybe all of them move away together and maybe both families know each other’s secrets. This happened to my boss and her son in 2019 she got pregnant with her son baby on New Year’s Eve