All Comments on 'Bimbo Builder Academy Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Twist

I really am loving how the plot thickens, but i really hope you don’t go down a similar route with this story like you did with your BDE story, where Mitch ends up losing Julia to Clayton forever. Maybe Julia and Mitch reconcile and they, Lena, and Danielle/Raven all live happily together. I know that’s probably not it, but I truly hope something close to it happens

houseblackfyrehouseblackfyreabout 4 years ago
Another five star chapter

Great chapter. Excellent twist, I knew Julia wasn't going to exit from the story so early. It seems like she's had some of the principles teachings engraved on her mind as well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Now the big question: was Julia captured, or has she been on the hypnotist's side the whole time? Find out next time on Dragon Ball

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

I knew it. I knew Julia was already under their influence.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wow

You have become a master story teller.

asianToy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
fantastic work

the plot thickens...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Master of truth

Please continue master of truth series too!

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Like a snake, one twist after another.

Dramatic organ (not that one) chord.....Not Julia?!?!,,,Oh my.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

still here!...

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