All Comments on 'Birch Tree Cottage'

Great story

Good first attempt - let's see more!

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A well written and wondrous story, I enjoyed your depictions of Becky transitioning from a dull lover to a new and exciting chapter in her life. I’m an autumn spirit, my time is best spent out on the trails in the fading of summer beauty, enjoying chill breezes and teas with earthen spices… I could practically taste that reading through, and smell the cold in the air and lost myself in the mystery surrounding the older woman and her cottage. I wonder if she was a witch, perhaps? Definitely some aura of mystery and enchantment surrounding her… I doubt Becky will ever forget her time with the lovely gal and her potent brew. Kind of the woman in the cottage to pack a little memento for her!

Fantastic first submission. I’ll look forward to your future works.