All Comments on 'Bird Watching'

Liked the way of writing. Also the little twist at the end.

Thanks for taking the time to comment-that means so much! Glad that you enjoyed the story.

It was not drawn out, it kept the interest going and I enjoyed it. I also liked the twist at the end!

Wow, great story. I may take up bird watching!

What a lovely story, the build is well done with a nice mix of descriptions to bring the scene alive.

Very erotic. My wife and I got very horny reading your story. We use stories as a form of foreplay and this story did the trick. Thanks.