All Comments on 'Birds, Bees and Booze Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Pregnant I LOVE

I love this story, but especially the ending wher her father cums inside her and she asks him to make her pregnant!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
more please with mom

Please continue write with mom getting involved with them.

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 5 years ago
Early Flights!

Great story Looking forward to more chapters to this post and the promised additions to others.

Something had me suspicious that Mom just might catch an early flight and surprise the love birds. Lots of possibilities from this point re Mom, Dad and Daughter. Let's see how the author spins the yarn from here!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Next, please?

Next, please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Omg

Please dont stop there! What will her reaction be.. will they ever get to the clinic to rake the plan b? Will she go to college?

Please dont keep us all waiting forever

LepetitcygneLepetitcygneover 5 years ago
CLIFFHANGER!

This story is so good!! Don’t leave us like this!! Can’t wait for the next chapter!!

curious9632curious9632over 5 years ago
Loved it!

hoping you continue this story, it's too good

DesertSurferDesertSurferover 5 years ago
GREAT Story!!

I have been going crazy with anticipation waiting for the next chapter!! PLEASE do not stop.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
What's next?

A really wekl thought out series and well written...I know mom is gonna be pissed , but she helped start this, but it went where she probably did not mean...or did she??? please to develope further, many will be really curious to what mom decides....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Next, please.

Next, please.

RelentlessOnanismRelentlessOnanismabout 5 years ago
Keep the mother out of it...

I've enjoyed reading this story quite a lot, but I'm a little wary about where you may be taking it next. I think including the mother is a mistake. You've created quite an intense romance between father and daughter, with hints of a potential incestuous pregnancy. It would be more fun and exciting if you kept it as an affair, rather than a threesome. Fooling around behind someone else's back is more illicit and enjoyable than incorporating the mother into the relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
And?

And?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Now is a good time to continue!!

Now is a good time to continue!!

curious9632curious9632almost 5 years ago
Good story

what happens next, Im dying to know

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
eh

I think it'd be a mistake to "normalize" or "rationalize" it by adding the mother. based on the personality shown of her there's no way she'd be okay with this, she was nearly crying just at the thought of even having a sex talk with her daughter. what would make the MOST sense going forward is a LOT of drama and angst. she should be livid! I can see her kicking the dad and and immediately filing for a divorce and trying to keep the father and daughter apart. I feel like his instincts on her reaction would be correct. he knows her more than her daughter.

KinkycplWiKinkycplWiover 4 years ago
Heather Mom at the door

Wait, you have to finish this ahhhhhh I'm dripping and so close.

Please bring them all together ahhhh waiting please get to typing hehe

Thank you,

Annie

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please

Well, you brought us this far and you lay the groundwork. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Time to finish!!

Time to finish!!

anubeloreanubelorealmost 4 years ago
dude, don't leave us hanging like this!

In your bio update, you didn't mention the birds bees and booze... please tell me you're not going to leave it here!?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Well, that kinda takes care of the whole "How do we tell mom?"-issue. It also makes for a huge cliffhanger, as to how mummie copes with coming home to hubbie filling daughter-dearest pussy to the brim with his essence. A Ch. 9 is called for.

Jormungandr376Jormungandr376over 3 years ago
continue the story please!

Plenty of us want to know what happens next! please continue this amazing story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
9???

Birds, Bees and Booze: 8 Part Series

Birds, Bees and Booze Ch. 01 (4.69) Should you really include drinking with The Talk? Hot Incest/Taboo 07/04/14

Birds, Bees and Booze Ch. 02 (4.63) What more can Daddy teach his daughter? Hot Incest/Taboo 08/31/14

Birds, Bees and Booze Ch. 03 (4.61) Daddy and daughter take a shower and continue playing. Hot Incest/Taboo 11/18/18

Birds, Bees and Booze Ch. 04 (4.69) Daddy and daughter truly make love. Hot Incest/Taboo 11/19/18

Birds, Bees and Booze Ch. 05 (4.76) Time to face reality? Or succumb to the new relationship? Hot Incest/Taboo 11/20/18

Birds, Bees and Booze Ch. 06 (4.69) Cait wants to hear about Daddy's first time. Hot Incest/Taboo 11/21/18

Birds, Bees and Booze Ch. 07 (4.68) Father and daughter discuss what to do about Mom. Hot Incest/Taboo 11/22/18

Birds, Bees and Booze Ch. 08 (4.77) Daddy and daughter take it to the pool. Hot Incest/Taboo 11/23/18

locltazlocltazover 3 years ago
More!!

I’ve nutted so many times during this series! Give me more!!!!

BradloserkidBradloserkidover 3 years ago
Would love more

We’ve been stuck on a cliffhanger for two years now. I love your other stories but this one is by far my favorite.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Please, please, please continue!!!! Chapter nine! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Puggy1963Puggy1963over 3 years ago
Why!

Why did you stop writing this story?

You’re killing me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
We all want MORE - more - more

This is a really excellent story that you have produced. I've been enjoying this very much and want to be able to read more chapters of it.

I emplore you to write more and keep us from the disappointment that will surely take place if there is no more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow, you really need to write one more chapter at least so we can see how Heather deals with her husband and daughter having a torrid affair and knowing that she is at least partly responsible for this happening, Will she make it a happy three-some or will she just totally wig out?

Quiet2DayQuiet2Dayabout 2 years ago

Please finish this! I am begging!

Tom5616Tom5616about 2 years ago

I really enjoyed it ! Please finish it !!!!!!

dbsidedbsidealmost 2 years ago

Honestly... I doubt divorce papers were filed 🤭

Most chapters were 🌟 ⭐ 🌟 ⭐ 🌟

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

We’ve been stuck on a cliffhanger for five years and probably will never know the fate of the dad and daughter and the mother and if they daughter did whine up pregnant or if the mother divorced they father

rbloch66rbloch66over 1 year ago

Good story, but leaving it incomplete is a real dick move.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Heather, standing at the patio door, staring right back at Cait and me.

As I attempted to got to chapter 9 with my raging hardon I realized there was not a chapter 9.

Dude - you have to finish this story. There are at least 2 more chapters waiting for you to pen the words.

Don't leave us hanging here!

And thank you so far for this wonderfully loving story. I only hope that Heather decides to join in and the 3 of them can experience the love and enjoy each others bodies - and fluids!

BITENLAIRBITENLAIR7 months ago

A quand la fin de cette histoire ?

ToughSailorToughSailor4 months ago

Come on. You can't leave us hanging; Heather-wise. Pick up your pen again.

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