All Comments on 'Birds In Flight'

Delightfully romantic story with only a hint erotica. Would enjoy following the two protagonists further on their journey.

A little delight of a story, nicely illustrating the follies of small-town petty bigotries and even pettier minds. Well done.

Not much erotica - better suited in the romance section.

That was thoroughly pleasant and absolutely adorable. Well done!

That was perfect! 🥰🥰

Thank you, everyone, for your comments so far! <3

To the anon who pointed out it would work better in the Romance category, I agree completely. I submitted it originally to "Non-Erotic" since, as you pointed out, there's not much erotica. Laurel must have felt it went better in "Lesbian Sex", since that's where it wound up. Sometimes category submissions are out of the writer's hands.

This is great! Well written, entertaining, excellent story telling... And I get the "what category problem" completely, I had the same issue with "Pancakes" (be warned, it is not a fun story.)

Anyway, I lke it, A great short read! Five stars and a fave.

It's a pleasure to have discovered this lovely little story. I don't mind the lack of erotic content, but I realise that's what others are here for.

well done. so many roadblocks in life. what was the old song, "Signs" ? about no long haired people allowed.

So happy to catch-up to another story of yours! I always enjoy your writing, regardless of length. Too much of what’s on Literotica is frustratingly neither. Obviously a sex scene in this one would have felt really forced, and your style always comes off so effortlessly, why lead it where it doesn’t want to go. Cheers for posting!

Welcome back!

The story was cute and diverting. I'm not going to critique it. After reading/critiquing Crash, there's no need for me to say any more about your writing.

Excellent! Short, sharp and very little wasted space, also plenty of teen angst/flounce/drama from our central character, loved the part about throwing herself out of the window…. into the roses five feet below! Fwiw the Dick van Dyke “cockney” is still the gold standard for a hilariously bad British accent btw, although I confess Keanu Reeves version from the early 90’s Dracula takes some beating!

Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz 5⭐️

Oh wow! What wonderful melodrama. This is so sweet, so affecting, so gorgeous. I graduated high school (well, 6th form as we Brits call it) in ´99 and things were no better in the UK I can tell you.

I am so here for these love stories.