All Comments on 'Birds of a Feather Ch. 13'

My God man -- get a fucking proof reader or spell check or something to really help you out as there were way to many words screwwed up in this story.! Like: That woman is going to give you some beautiful babied. // and then 'shots of cun down her throat'. and then == legs far apart it was running down her "lips" <<< hips...duh.

I only counted 42 mis-spells in this short story ---- please get somebody to """PLEASE""" proof read for you or better yet get 5 or 6 people to help you as you are going to need them.! Did you ever get past the 3rd grade.??

Still enjoy the story and the direction it's going, but as the other anon said there are a lot of errors in it this time 'round. Might invest some time or foreign help with that in the future, there are numerous willing editors here on LE so reach out without fear.

4* this time.