All Comments on 'Birth of a Top'

It's interesting to see how the Top is thinking about these encounters. Most stories are told from the bottom point of view.

As a former Top who's still married, I loved this fuck up Memory Lane.

Love the POV of the top maybe the next story will give some back ground info on our stud top. Keep up the story line please

Amazing how one encounter with a Black Bottom so turned him on that he was almost ready to start again.

Your descriptive writing is so very readable and I look forward to your further literary endeavours.

Best wishes from Patrick

Really like your writing still and subject matter. Using him as a fleshlight is a hot hot hot sentiment.

I lost a friendly wrestling match to a white guy I work for and when I hollered double or nothing he came back with whoever loses this time gets topped by the other. I'm more muscular but the more I struggled the more slippery he got. When I at last tapped out he wasted no time pulling down my pants and tighty whities, spitting on my ass and his cock and driving it home. "Bottoms up brother!" he chortled as he split my thick black ass. He's married but I'm his regular stress reliever now.

I was 18 I had only had blowjob give and received, missing, nipple play and had gotten a rim job or two. I missing a 30s Marine built all muscle was sucking my cock and playing with my nipples said to fuck him. Ok I have never done it before. He bent over and used bottom hands to expose his tight hole. I loved looking at a man’s wedding ring when getting a blowjob and now. He said put your hard cock in. At first it was hard to get it in I used my hand to guide it. I pushed and pushed and I went balls ball deep my 6-1/2 inches. He screamed I said are you ok? He said it had been years so it hurt but I need it bad. Then I went back and forth and keep saying hard so I went as hard as I could but it did not take long I must have 3 or 4 times I just keep going. It felt so good and was so tight!!! I held it for awhile a fulled out. I turned around and suck my cock clean. I loved it. He said thanks I got to get home before my wife misses me and take the boys to little league game. My first breeding and one of my favorites.

I enjoyed this very descriptive story!

I am also a brown bottom. Mr. Ralston was in the manager training program when I was warehouse supervisor. The ice storm in Atlanta years ago caught us by surprise and by the time we got everything shut down we were unable to leave. Marooned together for 2 plus days we talked a lot - family, corporate paths, desires. Most of the time I couldn’t keep my eyes off his buff body and penetrating blue eyes. At one point after I’d showered he made it very clear that my fat ass was better than his wife’s. We slept in the director’s office and huddled together for warmth the second night and when he turned over at one point and pierced me with those eyes, I just said, “yes”. He kissed me, then ground his surprisingly big cock against me, then he removed my clothes and his own, rubbed some nearby lotion on my ass and fiercely took me. I’ve moved on to another company but I’m still happily his side thing, every month or so.