All Comments on 'Birthday'

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DannyeightDannyeightalmost 2 years ago

Another 5/5 Chris... The mastery continues.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Such a good writer

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I cannot approve of this story in any way and have no desire to be treated like Chris,but I think the story is hot,hot,hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

why does a possibly great story have to have the female become such a bitch with the corporal punishment and the extreme denial of female or sexual pleasures. when a lot of simple teasing and denial would do a better jod. please keep trying to write.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

boy if i was her boyfriend i'd be running for the door before she gets mad at you and chains you down for a good beating or even cage your cock too..

LoveRangerLoveRangeralmost 2 years ago

It's no Lilac Society, but it ain't bad...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wait until she’s fast asleep and quietly slip a knife between her ribs angled upwards to penetrate the heart.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A horrible, well written story. Poor, lucky Chris. I was straining in my cage reading this. Feeling sorry for Chris yet excited at the same time. Horrible my dick betrays me.

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