All Comments on 'Birthday Gift for Mom'

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oldsage_1oldsage_17 months ago

Loved the story but you teased us enough about Christmas that we need another chapter.

Hey great to have the word Doc back. It's been a bit and these last couple stories are a real treat.

Stay well, be happy and keep writing please! Your fans need you!

Cheers

SAGE

bucco40bucco407 months ago

Hope you write about Christmas.

Xanada98Xanada987 months ago

In the wrong category

Incest

DocWordsDocWords7 months agoAuthor

@xanada98 - it’s in the incest category where it belongs

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Coldly written, no emotions. Three stars.

202GE202GE7 months ago

The addition of the "father" wanting to watch was offputting. May want to add a tag to that effect.

cleveland1rockscleveland1rocks7 months ago

Enjoyed it. Definitely needs some emotion between characters. Maybe some real lovemaking between Lori and Rich…with something special Lori does as a thank you to Rich.

mytimetobehappymytimetobehappy7 months ago

hopefully theres a part 2 and its more descriptive.

HungryPapaBearHungryPapaBear7 months ago

Love the premise. My mother & father used to take us to a nudist beach regularly when I was a kid, & they used to be naked most of the time at home. & my mom was always very touchy feely including kisses on the mouth, so yes I see this as very plausible. I am jealous of Rich. The only part, for me, that was off putting was Dick bringing his friends to see Rich's cock.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

It must be every guys dream to have the chance to fuck their mother in law! Diane my mother in law had lived on her own since her long term partner died,even though she was 70 at the time Diane was still a good looking woman,just chatting with my wife sasha one night and she asked me if I felt sorry for her mother? In what way I said? Well she must be lonely and it's been a long time since she's been with a man! Yeah maybe baby I said,you could make her happy if you wanted sasha said,I thought I was hearing things, you're saying that I can have sex with your mother? It's not as if you'd leave me for her is it? It would just be sex, does she know about this? Sort of! I have mentioned you to her but I'll talk to her again,fuck I thought, if Diane agrees I'm going to fuck my mother in law! To cut a long story short Diane was OK with the idea and not long after that I went to her house to do the deed, are you sure about this Diane I asked her? Positive was her answer,she was a little bit rough playing with my cock but soon got into the swing of things and gave me an incredible blowjob, I couldn't believe how wet her pussy was,she loved every second of me fucking her

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My stories and characters are fiction. I wish I could have done all this stuff. The reviews from Anonymous, on the first few, nearly drove me away. Fortunately, some seasoned writers stepped up and warned me to take comments like those with a grain of salt. It helped. I read...