All Comments on 'Birthday Girl'

Great story. Need to read more of the adventures of Sara and yourself. Please send in more!!!

great story. hope there will be many more chapters to come

YOU are a very good erotic writer. I hope you favor us again...and soon!

Great story, and keep on writing

oh WOW!!!

ohh! that was soo hott,your a writer for sure! i wish you had finnished her birthday night. i was so sad too see there wasnt a second page.