All Comments on 'Birthday Party Revenge'

nylondad;A good story that aroused the sleeping tiger in my shorts. Also brought back a very fond memory.I hope she happens to see and read this as well.It was just once but I can still feel her hot tight pussy.Thanks Man for bringing up that forbidden but sexy memory. okdeacon

When you play with fire, you might get burned.

Boyd

Are you sure that John is your kid? Also, why don't you continue with Vanessa, since she is obviously in need of some good loving? Perhaps you and she can get something growing in her belly and you can simply ditch Monique for your doubts about her fidelity. This story needs a continuation.

There should be more to this story, IMHO. He needs to know for sure if she fucked Roy and maybe is still doing so. Is John his son? What happens if he isn't??

Just where does his marriage go from here? Since the wife ad Vanessa's husband are non existent in their bedrooms do they continue the sex?

Of course, a one-time thing can be a secret; an affair can't.

some one finish this one

some even Hetro and family/ TK U MLJ LV NV

Not enough development.

Needs a continuation - what happened to the wife? How about if she finds out. Was she having a fling with "Big Mike"?

There are four sisters and your wife is the middle one. How's that work?

but not that good. The author had us set up perfectly for our hero's kid and Vanessa's kid to look so much alike that they had DNA tests. The two kids had the same father, and that father was NOT our hero. Accordingly, he gets both women preggers. THAT is redemptive revenge.

A good start to an interesting story than BAMB a dud.

Well that.................sucked.

That's definitely Jersey Shore shit.

Were two of the sisters twins, thus accounting for Monique being in the middle by age? Maybe say that or change the number of sisters to three. You know, for those of us who pay attention to details...

FTDS!