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All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise'

by blitzz05

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great

Hey loved the story. It would be a great day if we all could have a shot at our MIL's. Cant wait to read more of your work.

Jena121Jena121over 16 years ago
needs work.................

Short and sweet - BUT - still needs some proof reading

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchover 10 years ago

Short. More of an excerpt than a story.

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