All Comments on 'Birthday Surprise Pt. 02'

Thoroughly enjoyed with exception of closing “six years later” paragraph. Can only hope/trust that you intend to share that part of Susan’s life. Nice, highly erotic.

This chapter was good but chapter one was better.

This is part of the story - so it will be addressed.

Susan describes her first time being with a woman or in this case women.

Susan understands that she has been targeted for being straight and that these women technically took advantage of her. Yet - it is okay because she enjoyed the experience.

I wonder if her conclusion (that it was a good experience) was a psychological defense mechanism to not confront the feelings that she was abused by these two women.

Just thoughts.