All Comments on 'Birthday Wish'

Hot story, 5 stars. This is small detail I can't get over but you don't have to say " exposing my bra encased breasts." If she's wearing a bra we automatically know it's covering her breasts, it seems unnecessary to mention what it's covering.

My sissy husband wants to see me, a most prominent person in the community, in bed with other men while he watches. Oh my, what to do? Oh, I know, I'll fuck my brother. Yes, that's a stellar idea. Brother/sister incest stories can be interesting, this one missed the mark entirely.

Puke. 1*

A life time of dreams can be had from a story like this. On the very edge of going over the cliff while brother was doing what most brothers want to do in comes a son to his mum. I should call my sister up - thank you.

Birthday wish to become a cuck? Just go for self-mutilation next time.

More-please!! We need to learn what happens and who gets her ass first. Maybe the daughter should join the fun and games?

Wow. Next chapter please.

Seriously hot sex scene but the addition of the son with no resistance from a woman you presented as a good, Christian man with a little kink was a little too over the top. 4*(I have no idea how Curtis could want to see his wife get fucked by her big dick brother, but I know there are guys out there that might, so I didn't "deduct" points for it.)

Sick, disgusting crap. But hey, that's just one man's opinion.

Fucking fantastic! My cock was like a rock through the story. Write more on this subject. Maybe daughter should become involved.

loving wive cuckold garbage disguised as I/T

Fantastic! Loved it and hope more are coming....

Wonderful. Loved every bit of it. Have a little more fun and blind fold her. That way she wouldn't have known her son was there. Maybe next time keep the incest people happy and make it a step son. But I loved it anyway.

Looking forward to a part two. Slightly forced story.I like when you build up the beginning of your stories.

Good story. Short, hot, and dirty. Not too much set up and just the right amount of sex. Looking forward to a part 2 and seeing where you take this story.

Good story but not my cup of tea.

"bra encased breasts"? as opposed to what other way use does a woman use a bra. LOL!

Fun read!! Thank you!!!!!!!

Very similar to your other story but this one was better.

Next time I see my girlfriend in her underwear I'm going to try to use the phrase "bra encased breasts" to her to see her reaction. LOL.

Great story loved it

Super Hot.

AWESOME!

Loved it, ready for next one plz.

So fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Nice

Should have led with a disclaimer that this is a cuckold story.

Bill S.

It WAS A great STORY. When she sucked her son to a hard erection she should have welcomed him into her pussy where he could have has a Super Climax.

I've read better and read worse.

Damn, awesome story! Maybe you can still continue it.

What about the daughter, she does not come to the birthday of the father?

Daughter gets fucked by father, brother and uncle.

The deflowering of her ass.

Mother gets fucked in pussy, ass and mouth at the same time by husband, son and brother!

Church going, PTA , ECT. Bringing the son in out of the blue (for mother.) Made it unbelievable. Even father's don't play with themselves in from of sons. Her choice was perfect, but brothers choice was plain stupid!! Stories to hold any merit have to be somewhat believable

Please write another chapter. Super hot!

OK . . What happened to 'Bree? Otherwise a good story.

Congratulations, you hit the trifecta. Stupid, ugly, and pathetic.

I want part two, where her brother's very hairy pussy wife wants to try lesbian, gets done and does her sister-in-law, her sisters-in-law's husband, and her own husband. 5 stars.

next please !!

Fun story but getting CJ's age wrong was a bit distracting. If dad was 20 when he was married, then Bree was born when he was 20 or 21 and CJ would likely be born a minimum of 9 months later, so dad would have been 21 or 22 and thus CJ would have been only 18.

Agree with others, a follow-up could be fun, including the daughter - maybe for Mom's bday?

I loved it I was hoping the daughter would have come in and straddled her dad fucking him hard as she wanted her uncle and brother fucking her mom and cumming in her over and over while her dad came deep in her. There's a lot more story here to be told. But I think it cumming if you know what I mean! I think they both could be impregnated wondering witch one of the three is the father to the baby growing in there belly's. Absolutely loved it will be waiting for more.💯

Very well done