All Comments on 'Bisexual American Man'

really loved the story. i am gay, not bisexual and this is as close as anyone has come to explaining the bi phenomenon to me.

Very nice, and it made me think a lot.

Just one suggestion: you don't need to keep giving everyone's surnames when you refer to them. I know you're probably trying to be clear, but it has the effect of making the reader think, "Hang on, I know there's one character called Titus / Lauren etc, but is this a new person, since you're given the full name [again]?" It's fine now and again, to give impact, but too much is mildly distracting. And unless you DO have two characters with the same first name, you don't need it, because you write very clearly.

All in all, I liked your story very much. You've achieved a nice mix of erotic and romantic without getting too caught up in the everyday details which sometimes put readers off. I hope you continue writing.