All Comments on 'Bisexual Camping Adventures Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good start!

Very good start on a new series, looking forward to seeing what happens after they get wasted at the pub ;)

mike3820mike3820about 15 years ago
when's the next chapter?

I want to know what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
And?

The story was good, as a tease. When is the next chapter coming? You spent all that time setting up for them to give into their curiosity, and then nothing.

Good imagery and all, just incomplete.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very well written! Depiction of the 2 young men as they are overcoming social norms is outstanding

I could teach either of the 2 young men a thing or two.

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