All Comments on 'Bisexual Journey Ch. 08'

Some parts of this story were done very well, others not so much. Too wordy would be a gross understatement. Your description of his emotions and feelings were so far over the top and repeated so many times that I found myself skipping whole pages. To be honest it got boring. The story would not have suffered if it had been condensed down to 3 or 4 chapters. It started out as 5, but the author’s penchant for wordiness took over and it quickly dropped to a generous 3. You need an editor to boil your stories down to something readable and enjoyable.

To equate being the receptive partner in anal sex between men with becoming a female inside a male body shows a pathetic lack of knowledge concerning either topic and a very warped view of masculinity. Diagones claimed a high level of expertise as an author. It is disappointing, though perhaps not surprising, to see so clearly that the emperor wore no clothes.

I really appreciated the respectful way each treated the other. Thank you! A great read.

I've been reading stories for years here. Today, I believe I have found the best writer on Literotica. This was a beautiful, eloquent tribute to bisexuality and man-to-man love. Stunning...

Enjoy your writing, hope you continue soon.

one of the best descriptions I've ever read. Thanks for the great series.

Reading this story series has made me so hot that I now want to be fucked in my ass! I have had only one man fuck me many years ago, but I still miss it.

This whole series is just incredible. The build-up to this one, and then...

The moderator or whoever must have made a typo. Two is not a group. Oh well...

Why is this chapter in group sex???