All Comments on 'Bishop Takes Knight Ch. 03'

good effort keep writing! Drive the annnony asshole crazy!

Too vain to even see the lampoon.

The story continues growing in heat and appeal...thank-you

and it really doesn't matter. this is how laurel likes it.

Hi, you do write with a mind to your reader's varied tastes and I appreciate that even though it sometimes is a tedious read with overly detailed descriptions. That's the old teacher coming out in me so please don't take it personally

LW is exactly what it was designed for. Women who fuck around. You're the only one who can't seem to comprehend this. Its not made for assholes like you. It's made for people who are adults and can separate fiction from real life. Just because your wife fucked around on you , you hate tHs and the idea. But you asshole of LIT It's not going to hange for your dumbass. And as long as you vote against it I will vote for it. So eat shit, die and leave this site alone ! GD YOUA RE SUCH FUCKING ASHOLE

Well written and hot.

eat shit dick head. Kisses!!! Bonnie

Love this work. Really insightful into the London and EU underbelly. Best sex in the world as you are describing so well. Keep writing. Xoxoxoxo Annette

bonnietaylor calling herself an adult. Adults don't behave like you do Bonnie. Maybe you better reconsider your statement. You behave more like a spoiled child. Mommie, mommie the anons are being mean to me. Can I cuss them out and call them names? Of course dear, do unto others as they do unto you. Is that it? It's that what you've been thought as a child? Feel sorry for you, making such a fuss on a "Porn" site.

No comment on story. Didn't read it. Apologize author for taking up space here, but I've seen the comments from this reader so often bashing others I couldn't resist retaliating. If this is the kind of reader you prefer, you can have them.

To all the negative people and the ones that are fighting with each other, please refrain from doing that cause it does not make the writers look bad, only the ones who are acting childish! Take to another place and fight it out. Not on someones story which was a fantastic story!

"thinking his cock had stopped someplace in her chest cavity"

I know that sensation!