All Comments on 'Bite-Sized: One Big Step Ch. 04'

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SomeDamnedDudeSomeDamnedDude9 months ago

Does this story ignore the existing relationships between parent and child? I like it in any case and await the next installment. What is the proper order to read this interconnected series of stories? I am considering starting the entire body of your writings over and rereading it again as they were very enjoyable and well written. 5/5 as always with your works.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Too dude; it's an alternate universe story I think.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

It seems that your assumption is that the reader has just read the previous 'chapter.' Such is not the case in literotica.com

There MIGHT be subsequent submissions adjacent to each other. But most usually not. For this occurance, the reader would need to be in your stories, which is only possible after the series have been posted.

You do offer well written stories and deserve good ratings. Much more-so than a lot of authors !

LanceQuiverLanceQuiver7 months ago

To SomeDamnedDude:

I strongly suspect this was a cut storyline that was essentially replaced w/ the ‘Cream & Coco’ / ‘Cherry on Top’ stories.

So its not technically ‘canon’, lol!

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