All Comments on 'Biz Trip Brings Out Wife Ch. 02'

This is a very beautiful story. Truly erotic, with intense images. Congratulations of your ability to craft a wonderful tale of love and lust.

You had a great 1st chapter!!! You set some high expectations for following chapters. Chapter 2 is not what we expected, you took the easy lazy route. Too bad, so sad...just another cuk story

well written - interested to see how this turns out hurry with next chapter

a real big one

I have received some nasty and harsh comments including telling me I'm gay and "pathic," which I presume was intended to read "pathetic." While I don't understand why people who hate a story read it through and take the time to make nasty comments about the author's person, no matter. This tells me I did my job well in setting up a surprise - which will be posted soon.

I encourage the haters out there to give the next chapter: the conclusion to this segment, a shot, and then consider how lazy a writer I am.

you made your story about a couple morons! It's called being a "peeping tom" you could walk around any neighborhood and take secret photos... people don't do it cause YOU END UP IN JAIL. No one but an absolute moron would fall blackmail to someone who has committed a felony! Can't you spend at least five minutes putting a little thought into your stories before you post them? Author, it is a real simple formula... if you don't respect yourself, your writing effort, neither can your readers.

The only person going to jail would be the pervert who trespassed and videotaped her without her knowledge or consent. On top of it all, he sends an E-MAIL detailing his blackmail??!?! WTF, now, in addition to trespassing and sexual assault, he's charged with blackmail. I quit reading at that point.

Another spot faced 12 year old trying to write

You are going to wimp out or grow some backbone and tell them to go to hell with what they are putting you through......

Tell the wife to never come home again for her own good and if you ever find out who the guy is you will kill him on sight. Then turn off this bit of stupidity.

This was WAY less realistic than the previous chapter. I guess this is the point where you start fantasizing and hopping nobody else will notice.

This is too strange for me. You can only be blackmailed if you allow yourself to be. True, they messed up, but really, the threats are so out of touch with reality, plus she knows who the blackmailer is, so retribution/revenge for blackmail is possible. So...come on get real!

Same old pathetic cuckold sissyboy nightmare. NO man alive would sit there and jerk off while his so called 'wife' fucks another man, and as for her being blackmailed? dogshit. There is no blackmail. Your so called 'loving' wife is a whore who has to fuck other people because you don't do it for her anymore. So you might as well be Gay.

You will tell her to go ahead and accept his cock, but when you get home you will find out that she cagily staged it all without a guy even present. Then what are you going to do, since you have opened the door for her to "freelance" all she wants to in the future. BUT, then there are effective "interventions", and perhaps this is one of them, and you tell her no, not to accept that cock and then find out that it was staged.

I found this to be a sensitively written, and interesting variation, of the usual story in this genre.The way Max examines his own impulses, and the effect they have on his wife, give a depth that is commonly lacking in such stories. The scenario is constructed to highlight the dilemma, and duality, of Max's fantasies. The fact that this causes him pain, as well as excitement, adds a realism to the piece, and makes the character of Max, believable.

I am off to read the last chapter.

to fall for that crap.

I don't care for blackmail. You started ch. 1 great and went downhill from there. I hope you fix this; make it right. We'll see...

that got weird, cucky and stupid quick. If she faked all this she sure took a big chance on him telling her they were through.

If you think it's strange you got personally insulted you must not read the LW comments much. Read some of bigguy33's stuff and tell me he's not screwed up in the head.

But, I find myself continuing just to spot the next grammatical error.

If cuck authors don't want Barry comments, then don't write Harry stories.

There is no man there, it is all a ruse. Fantasy role play which is why we never see him and he came on her when she was off screen. That is my guess, and I hope I am right. Otherwise, he should have called the cops.