All Comments on 'Black'

please do continue, it starts off nice.

I have high hopes for the rest, good writing, feels a bit like The Wire. Good set up with rounded characters. Keep going as you are please. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC

I'm excited for the continuation of the story. Love the opening and can't wait to see how it develops.

It's a very rare thing to find a new writer here who remembers the 'Lit' before 'erotica.' Good, effective writing that gets us far enough inside Ace's head so that we think we understand a bit while knowing that most of us have absolutely no clue what he and his life are like. Nice use of Chekhov's Gun with Ace and Ivy, with Ace's "I know better than to go there" thinking... as if that's ever really protected a man from falling for a woman!

Great start; more, more!

why did you stop this was/is a wonderful beginning you really should continue

I like it started off really well can't wait to see where this goes