by Cherylann
More believeable than many of the "raped, but loved it" stories. I thought this was well done.
An engaging tale of rape and passion. Hoping to see a lot more sexy tales from this new author. From one passionate author to another...congrats on a job well done! Like a bottle of vintage wine, you will only get better and better!
It was realistic. Not like the other stories that I have come across where the women get attacked and enjoy the rough sex by the end. I respected both parties by the end of the story and it was a great turnon. The sex was incredible. I loved the first person narrative, we see inside her head the entire time so that her motivations have a real point. I think you did a wonderful job - really keep this up - you have become one of my favorite writers.
I loved the point of view by this woman writer. Great tension throughout-very believable and very erotic! I want more of her stories!
Loved it. Absolutely loved it, especially the descriptions of his eyes. i love eyes.
I hate rape stories and I would have liked this better if Tony had used lubricant for the ass, however, I really loved this story. The characters were believable and the suspense was there from begining to end. You are a good writer and I will look for more of your work.
I gave this a rating of four rather than five because I really, really dislike stories told in the second-person. This was kind of a blend of first- and second-person but very hot nonetheless.
I loved this story. Very hot. I could do without the pee, but it didn't really break the mood.
A women who writes rape fantasy, that really turns me on!
This story had me hooked from the start. I love how it ended. Will there be more?