All Comments on 'Black Flower: Ascend'

by DarkBlush

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
oooooooooooooooh

Is Hana going to wake from a beautiful dream into a horrific reality??? Her life seems like a fairy tale right down to killing Martin :D

ariesgirlariesgirlover 9 years ago

Please don't let anything else go wrong...at least for a while.

redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

i still dont get how she was accepted so easily into a yakuza family enough to marry into it.much less have all of this "respect" being shown to her by the rest of the families.

ladiebrowneyezladiebrowneyezover 9 years ago
huh...did i miss something?

feels like i missed MONTHS in their lives ... o.o like... man i was feeling this story in the beginning until you rushed everything ;l

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
otsukaresama

you have captured the flavor/essence exquisitely

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

The only issue I have with your story is that because it isn't numbered, you don't know where to begin or what follows on. I started on chapter three but figured out what went where.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Can't be over

Please just 5 more chapters.

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