All Comments on 'Black Lust Ch. 01'

Please continue...you have created a very effective perspective....

Same old same old racist bullshit.

Very well written and oh so erotic, but albeit, short chapter. Damn, I feel like I had just one chip with my fish. Please write more and soon.

Well written narrative. Keep going.

Great story, I very much liked the first part. Hope the second part cums soon.

Excellent start to what promises to be a very hot story. Eagerly awaiting the next part.

"We visited in the summer, late August"

That would be winter, in Zim,

Unreal. With the existing statistics regarding Aids in Africa and among blacks and other minorities in America this just doesnt fly. Should read more like have sex and die, your choice.

you can achieve your desire much closer to home.

Wanna read the next part, poor Luke was so naive. That country is a fuckin shithole, you couldn't pay me to go there with my girlfriend unless I had the Navy SEALs backing me up.

The comments below are pretty much correct, however, the story isn't a newspiece, it's a fantasy. As far as your writing, it's OK for a setup but watch those typos. They do detract from the story. That said, I see it's your first story (at least on Lit.). Pretty good start and practice will only make you better....as it does for many things.

The author has set the scene for an interesting and arousing story.

love this very hot horny story black lust ch one . reading this was so very erotic .

and horny . just know the next part will be awesome so on to the next part do.

I like the way you started this "adventure." The "forced" perspective adds a lot to the fantasy...both for the man and for the woman. Keep up the good work.

More more more more!

This is great so far, but too short. Please make the next chapter longer than a page.

I can't wait to read chapter 2 please keep it up Tara I love it.

Proper quality read?/<@>

Got me i;tchi'n for the nex@t epesode? DarkTrumps<>?

Great start to your story. Well written.

Don't stop now, keep it up! Its just getting good...

Chapter 2!!!

Loved the story so far. Do you enjoy having a man take you? Do you enjoy having your boyfriend humiliated, and rendered inconsequential? Are you shy and reluctant to be taken by a stranger? Do you resist until being overcome by a powerful bull, intent on having you and willing to use force to take what he wants?

I hope you continue in this vein and develop the female character, defining her feelings. Good Luck!

Still waiting, Tara! This is too good not to finish....

Great start to the story - cannot wait for next chapter

good story ready for part 2

love the story - left on a real cliff hanger. hope part 2 is available soon?

Please add the next chapter!

Hope it's getting hot!

I really enjoyed the first part of this story and Tara, you did mention "to be continued" so please, much like most of the others are saying, please write more of the story. I love stories about white women in Africa, Expatdad is one of the best authors I've read so far, and I'm absolutely infatuated with his stories, some of them are about his own true experiences. So please send us a few more chapters okay...

Tara_Bennett so we have Part 1. You then tease with "To be Continued," so where are the next parts??

Zimbabwe is rough, but not in an 'armed rebels' sort of way. More like in a no jobs, too much corruption way - so this story is unrealistic, but I guess it's fiction so...

Need new chapter soon!!!!

this really needs to be completed, a real turn on

You really need to write more of this story! I love it!

You defiantly need to do more iincludeing telling what happend after he blacked out maybe from another guys perspective

Black lust chapter 2

...to arrive so I can immerse myself in this lusty, forbidden world of intense pleasure and hedonism.

You people. You really don't care do you?

Whites raped Zimbabwe, not the other way around! Jesus, why can't I find some interracial non con without this B'S !

Now I'm done leaving feedback for the trolls, let me leave some for you.

It's good, I'd like to see where it goes.

I like the use of a specific dialect so we have an idea of where it takes place. That's some attention to detail there.

The trolls in the comment section aside, this is a good story.

Can't wait til ch 2.

I like your use of their language, nice attention to detail.

This is looking like a great story. Thanks. Please continue.

Phenomenal first part. I know this is 10 years old but if you still see this, there is demand for the second part.