by HisPeachyKitten
Congrats on baby. How many more chapters are you planning.
What an emotional roller coaster. Nice teaser about Leon's occupation. Looking forward to the next chapter.
You are a very talented writer and I do hope that you will keep enlighten us with your storylines. I myself being a submissive can feel what you are going for although I would have caved already wanting the pain to unlock the pleasure.
Oh by the way happy for you on being pregnant
Cinn
Congrats to you and your familyđ. Your story line and character development is excellent. Please continue on.
To anonymous above, didn't you read it? Her mom died, her dad beat her, killed her mom and was killed in oridon and then her grandma who raised her died! She basically has no one! That being said, I loved this chapter!! I especially remember smiling at the 'criss cross applesauce ' haha! Reminded me of my kiddos. This story reminds me of 50 shades in certain aspects. I cannot wait to read more. You give this story so much more substance than just sex. Keep up the good work! (:
Impressive!Well written.!I love the contest of wills in the chapter and hope to continue in this path.Looking forward to the next chapter.
Congrads for the new baby.
congratulations for your family, and you are a very good writer, but this story gets on my nerves... I got so excited when he expressed remorse after hearing about her childhood abuse, and when she did not let him get away with it, but then got quite disappointed with his reaction. I cannot believe that he chose to beat her with a belt after having heard about her abuse, and I cannot believe that she was turned on by that, it's just sick taking into account her past. I get all proud of her and excited when she stands her ground, and get annoyed when she succumbs to him, damn it, if she has a strong enough spine to keep in mind that what he is doing is inherently wrong, why can't she be smart enough to know that physical reaction to sexual stimuli doesn't have to equal mental submission?????
I canât help but be curious about his job. Iâm thinking that maybe thereâs much more to him than has been revealed. I know it will all come out in the end and I anxiously await the revealing of his true mission. He might own her but he is also her ârescuerâ as well. Very well written and thought provoking.
I shouldâve paid more attention to the date of when this was posted before starting to read cause I really want to know what happens next and thatâs not happening anytime soon ugh . đ