All Comments on 'Black Rain Ch. 02'

hmmmm, a 3 front war..

First of all, I don`t personally see anything wrong with being objectified for the purpose of a little sexual gratification :)

Secondly, I was so sorry when you took your story off the boards so long ago. I loved it then and I still do. I thought it was taken off so it could be published somewhere. It`s that good. Erotic sci-fi is my favorite genre, toss in a bit non-consensual sex and I`m a happy camper.

Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!

To the previous post... Thanks for the warm welcome. Several of my stories I'd like to see turned into books, but I realized that no one will get to read any of it until that happens, and I miss the critiques you guys offer. SOOOO I'm gonna keep working on here. Thanks again. Cheers!

I stopped reading at the "hairless ape" line... Won't be reading any moe of your offerings... See ya... Wouldn't wanna be ya....

-jaye-